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RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2007-08-07 09:37 PM



Don’t say goodbye yet, just give me time to heal
Just try to think how hard it is for me to feel
To feel the pain of losing someone who meant so much
The gorgeous little girl that I’ll never get to touch.

If that isn’t good enough then walk away
I can’t promise anything more to make you stay
If I say I love you, it’ll be a lie
Because last time I said that I watched someone die

Today I stand here with one final plea
Just stay for a little longer, Please don’t flee
Cause when your gone I just might fall apart
I don’t deserve a second chance cause I broke your heart
But I do deserve some sympathy for what I’ve been through
I’m walking away now with three final words “I Miss You”

© Copyright 2007 A Typical Aussie Chick - All Rights Reserved
BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-08-07 10:20 PM


"Don¡¯t say goodbye yet, just give me time to heal
Just try to think how hard it is for me to feel"

Well...i really hope that they give you a second chance. I know what it feels like to be denied one. If you ever need someone to talk to my e-mail is whodaho@yahoo.com. I've been there, and i would hate for you to have to be there alone

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08
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Australia
2 posted 2007-08-08 01:21 AM


Thanks Heaps
Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
3 posted 2007-08-08 05:38 PM


jess... i gots three words.....here they be:   I heart you
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
4 posted 2007-08-10 01:42 PM


i'm sorry. any loss is a blow. even a small one. well done.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
5 posted 2007-08-12 02:16 AM


oh Jess, I hope it all works out for you and you know I am always here for you. Always. I am glad you are able to write again, I missed you a lot.
Best Wishes
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Sexy_Tator_Tot
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since 2007-08-31
Posts 42
Arkansas
6 posted 2007-09-07 11:59 AM


I really liked this poem. And it had a flow to it that really drew me into it I guess.
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