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haiXraab
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since 2007-07-29
Posts 10


0 posted 2007-08-07 07:24 PM



For me it took
one look into your eyes
Then i knew
I would be in your life

I waited one long day
for the word that would change
our lifes forever
Would it be a yes or no?

A yes it was
You make me the most
happiest girl ever
I Love You

Our first kiss
We sort of missed
Each others lips
We made it up at lunch
with a french kiss

A few months later
In the middle of winter
you said i love you
It gave me the shivers
I love you too

We've had our good
and bad days
We've had our fights
and our make-ups

Baby each day with you
is never ending
I love each day we're
spending,together

I can't wait til the
day you ask me
to marry you

I can't wait til the
day we say I Do
Forever i'll be with you

I Love You
Oh baby
I Love You
Oh baby

We will have a lovely family
Oh baby we will be
the best parents ever

Our wedding day will be the best
I Promise I won't let anything
Ruin our happy day
It will be perfect

Oh sweety
You make me so happy
I'm yours
Forever

Years from now
We will tell our children
how we met
and how our love has grown

When they fall in love
at a young age,like us
We will know
That they are truely happy
(if nothing goes wrong,lol)

Baby together we will be
Forever in life

On the day we die
I want to die next to you
In your arms

Your the only person
Who adds meaning to my life
Without you I'm nothing

I Love you

Forever inlove with you

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littlefairy
Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51
New York
1 posted 2007-08-07 10:10 PM


it was sweet very good -Tara


hunnie_girl
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since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
2 posted 2007-08-12 01:36 AM


hmmm I really liked this mainly because I used to think this too.... It is good to have good to have dreams and I wish you all the best with everything... But a guy is a guy. They always make ya hurt.
Best Wishes,
Krysti

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member
since 2007-08-31
Posts 42
Arkansas
3 posted 2007-09-07 12:10 PM


The poem was very sweet. I think the same way about my fiance too. So Im just glad I can relate to it. Keep it up.
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