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Yogurt
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since 2007-07-20
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0 posted 2007-07-20 02:40 PM



Mother’s are angels

Sitting here on the cold floor
Looking into the eyes of an angel

I turn to see the light
My time has come

But wait something’s holding me back
I hear a voice

Its crying who have I shattered so
Who could love me like this

I see the face as my life fades away
It’s an angel called mother.

A mother who cares for her child
Is an Angel

She bring us into the world
And is crushed when we are taken out

A heart so unique and fragile
That its falls on a four letter word and is rebuilt on another
  
A mother’s love can heal a broken heart
And rebuild a friendship

With out a mother’s love were would we be
Sad and lonely heart less and mean

A mother is an Angel
She guides us threw are bad times

And is there threw the ruff times
She helps us choose the path way to a new life

If the old one needed to be renewed
A mother’s love you can’t find on the streets

My mother is my Angel how about yours?

© Copyright 2007 Megan - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-07-20 04:06 PM


I agree where would we all be without mothers, or someone there to care for us. good post Megan
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
2 posted 2007-07-20 04:49 PM


i loved this poem. it was really good, although i have diffrent angels...idk.

please read my piece called the halos being replaced.

yours are a better thought then mine

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
3 posted 2007-07-20 05:41 PM


Wonderful poem Although, my angel isn't always my mother...i loved it. Hope to read more soon.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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