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Clean up!
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Clean up! |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Clean up! Protector and tormentor My father dear Hates untidiness “Clean up” I hear I hate to listen To his fervent command And suddenly I realize I’m a slave to his demand Hearing father rant and rave Daughter, son, babe, all Control the unwanted urge To listen to our master’s call "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it was a kind of fun read just the way it had a sort of bouncy read to it like a bouncy rhythm |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
it kinda is bouncy isn't it? lol "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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