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Eden's Equal
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Irish blood flows through my veins Blood of ancestors long gone Ancestors from green country dear Who through courage and pride adoration gained My belief unwavering That God did look Upon country green and say “I’ve completed the world, And I do think, This green land matches Eden best.” He smiled upon my country dear The land to which I’ve never been He smiled and thought back to time begun And said “Had I sent them here, They’d not have sinned.” |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
hahahah lovely. i'm irish too, but very little, just a few drops. it made me smile. and you just be grateful they sinned or you'd not be here. lol. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow that was a beautiful right i liked the last couple lines of if he had sent them here they would not have sinned wonderfully written |
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