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surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-18 10:51 PM

My world came crumbling down
Around me today
The shattered pieces
Scattered every which way
Too broken
It can't be put back
It might be awhile
Before everything aligns
On just the right track
I'll sit in this mess
Till someone comes along
To pick up the pieces left
And gather my body
In their warm brace
Where I will stay
Till the day
It all comes crumbling down
Around me once again
Till then
I will rest

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-07-19 10:42 AM

Ahh...i've been there before. Sometimes no one comes and you have to pick yourself up

Nice write, i enjoyed.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2007-07-19 06:45 PM

very great write. i instantly had a emotion surge that sucked me into the piece. nice.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2007-07-19 07:01 PM

Nicely done. BrittanyJ is right though. I wish you peace. Thanks for sharing and write on...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-07-19 11:42 PM

woah I know exactly this feeling... ahh and I was trying to forget. oh well i'm glad this poem was what reminded me of the feeling instead of something else.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

sexykitten15
Junior Member

since 2007-07-22

Posts 34

5 posted 2007-07-22 10:02 PM

Ya i really enjoyed that..
I hope your not hurt a lot.
Keep writing i love to read it~

MegMeg
Member

since 2007-05-14

Posts 85
Virginia

6 posted 2007-08-18 06:40 PM

truly beautiful, i hope you'll feel better.

Leanne <3
Member

since 2007-08-25

Posts 216
N.S.W, Australia

7 posted 2007-08-25 05:05 AM

yeahh i've been there before
its written well though
easy to relate to

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