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BrittanyJ
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Come find me?

0 posted 2007-07-18 02:14 PM



Why are you doing this to me,
Coming around just like before?
You should leave, you might get hurt
'Cause i don't love you anymore.

There's no more protection for you here,
You shouldn't have played with my heart.
I knew you weren't the best of guys,
I should've seen that from the start.

But being young and very naive,
Made me easier for you to use.
It's been a while since you've known me,
Boy i think you'd better move.

I'm not the girl that i once was,
I changed when you walked out the door.
Now it's my turn to get revenge,
'Cause i don't love you anymore.

You've been warned, why aren't you gone;
I don't want you here.
I'm not afraid to call the cops again,
Why don't you seem to care?

Don't step forward, and take my hand,
You know i can't resist you.
Please don't come any closer,
I'm telling you i'm through!

Don't kiss me with your soft lips,
Please don't make me sin.
You've changed for good, and it's a shame,
'Cause i'm falling for you again.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

© Copyright 2007 Brittany Johnson - All Rights Reserved
Clockwork_Orange
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1 posted 2007-07-18 07:26 PM


nice.
surf_painter
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2 posted 2007-07-18 09:35 PM


oh wow i wasn't expecting that ending very well job done
Tinsel
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3 posted 2007-07-19 03:41 AM


That was ace!
branden726
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4 posted 2007-07-19 03:39 PM


Brittany, The more and more I read of your poems I am starting to think you are going through a real rough time with a certain one person. Ya know relationships are hard when your young... but they dont get easier when ure old. I hope if this is honestly about you and whats going on in your life you straighten things out.


BrittanyJ
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Come find me?
5 posted 2007-07-19 09:14 PM


It's a long story

[This message has been edited by BrittanyJ (07-20-2007 02:22 PM).]

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6 posted 2007-07-19 11:37 PM


really good flow I liked this
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Paul Wilson
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7 posted 2007-07-20 01:59 PM


Brittany...Enjoyed the poem. Well written with a little twist at the end. Keep up the good writing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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