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WaterFairy103
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0 posted 2007-07-17 01:24 PM


She can walk into a room of old ladies,
and have them dancing on the tables by midnight.
She can make the most insane things
sound so perfectly all right.
She's lost her basket of marbles,
she's not playing with a full deck.
When I looked at her for the first time, though,
I thought, "Hey, what the heck?"

She's crazy, not right in the head,
her mind is gone, it's easy to see.
But I know that, and it's OK,
because that girl is crazy about me.

She'll call five times a day,
just to check up on me.
She says she's a handful,
and I'm forced to agree.
She's a handful of everything good,
everything I'll ever want.
And when it comes to loving her,
I'll gladly be her idiot savant.

She's crazy, not right in the head,
her mind is gone it's easy to see.
But I know that, and it's OK,
because that girl is crazy about me.

I'm the literary equivalent of a Big Mac and Fries.
- Stephen King

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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-07-17 05:00 PM


this was real cute

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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2 posted 2007-07-17 06:17 PM


Awww!!! So sweet I liked it! Nice job.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-07-17 08:16 PM


woah this was really good so cute
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Clockwork_Orange
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4 posted 2007-07-17 09:39 PM


this was really good. i liked it alot, though its not my favorite, its still good.
surf_painter
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5 posted 2007-07-18 01:47 PM


awww it was soo cute and i loved how it just flowed so nicely and rolled off the tongue
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