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Waking Nightmare
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Waking Nightmare |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
Waking Nightmare Sleeping surrounded Sister, sister, Spirit Frightened beyond belief A feeling that consumes Utterly afraid And the turmoil inside Is killing the peace And she can’t even cry Ripping her self out of bed She checks the time Darting down the stairs Warnings of danger accompany her Stopping at the top of the rail She glimpses the time 4:02 stares at her in green A time she didn’t expect Walking into her parents room She wakes her mother And tells her she can’t sleep Mother says is to count herself to sleep But she asks if she could just stay And her mother knows The girl is afraid And so she lets her daughter stay For an hour the daughter prays Thinking herself into sleep And then the light comes And she wanders exhausted to her room "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I really liked the flow, but i'm not so sure i followed what was happening...care to explain?  So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
well it wasn't a nightmare b/c it was real. it was mainly feelings, but i just felt so afriad. and helpless. like it was something i couldn't control. i did, however, finally go to my parents room and slept there for an hour, something i hadn't done since before i can rememeber. -Red "I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow |
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