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WaterFairy103
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0 posted 2007-07-10 07:49 PM


~A lot of people commented on Simply Beautiful that guys aren't REALLY like that.Which is, unfortunately, true.And it got me thinking about what they're really like, and here is how I interpreted it... Enjoy...~

The way her hips sway when she walks,
The way her lips move when she talks.
She oozes sexy out every pore,
There’s no way I could want her more.

But as much as I want her, I’m still not sure
If I’m ever going to really love her.
She knows that, and she says it’s okay,
But I know it will get to her one day.

She’s a fantastic girl, she’s a lot of fun,
But I’m fairly sure she’s not the one.
She’ll find some guy who sees her beauty,
And who’ll appreciate it better than me.

We’re all lovey-dovey right now, though,
And we both know where it’s going to go.
We’ll say, “Goodbye,” “Hey, we had fun.”
And it’ll be over, it’ll be done.

No, we’re not in love, that’s a fact,
But it doesn’t really bug us, that.
And it may not warrant a diamond ring,
But for not being love, it’s the closest thing.



© Copyright 2007 Kelsey Dianne - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-07-10 08:01 PM


that's the sickest saddest excuse that i've ever heard of a man. well done. perfect, just like the owrst of them, and the worst of women too. sick and maddening, throwing away life times and happy times for one times. sick sad pitiful- perfect in portrial.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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2 posted 2007-07-11 05:15 PM


Lol, yes! That's it I really enjoyed it. And i actually do know guys who think like that!! You're very brave to try and get in thier heads...and you did a good job of that

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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3 posted 2007-07-12 12:51 PM


AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! this is truly the amaing truth.. I love this it is one of my fav. by you.. but hey I gotta stop saying that for all of your poems:P really great
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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