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Teen Poetry #8

Broken Hand(Destiny)

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-07-10 01:55 PM

Chains of Destiny are holding me down
Threatning to sqeeze the life
Out of my unsure soul
I look to you
And I wonder
Could you teach me what it's like
To feel warm instead of cold?

I'm cold inside not out
My spirit bleed
I try despreatly to scream
But the words just won't come out

Teach me to speak
The words htey need to hear
Teach me to know what they need me to know
Teach me, please, to understand
That I'm holding my destiny
In the plam of my Broken Hand

[This message has been edited by pen&paper (07-10-2007 02:40 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-07-12 01:08 AM

That I'm holding my destiny
In the plam of my Broken Hand~

great ending so strong

hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-07-12 03:46 PM

oh- well that must hurt that hand, destiny is no small thing.

-RED

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

3 posted 2007-07-12 04:20 PM

THANK U!!!!! <3 yas!

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