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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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In Love <3

0 posted 2007-07-08 10:18 PM



Brandish Hope

Tracing lines on her arms
They be the lines of sleep
Making their way to her heart
Marking her face, rubbed off in heat

Trailing thin nails along her throat
A guised protection of said place
Her finger lingers near jaw lines
Eyes see what makes feet run in haste

Trapped in glass and thoughts abound
Tired of confusion and feelings complex
Wondering around, not knowing now
She’s trapped in a witchy, ugly hex

The feeling that’s trailing
It just has to be fake
Because, if it is really
It’ll be the hardest thing to take

Banishing all thought of it
She said a single prayer
And suddenly she knew
She’d never wonder if He’s there

If love were a picture that painting would never be finished.

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2007-07-09 11:02 AM


Trapped in glass and thoughts abound
Tired of confusion and feelings complex
Wondering around, not knowing now
She’s trapped in a witchy, ugly hex

The feeling that’s trailing
It just has to be fake
Because, if it is really
It’ll be the hardest thing to take

my fave part. but the entire piece was astounding. hope to read more.  CO

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