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The Word Spinner Returns And She's Taking Back Her Crown
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The Word Spinner Returns And She's Taking Back Her Crown |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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I’m the word spinner, the Aussie wonder And I write the poems that pull you under. My long brown hair lies upon my face my life so shattered and fragile like lace I left this place several months ago Too find myself and hopefully grow I lost my daughter, but she’s an angel now I’ve finally dealt with it and stopped asking myself how I’ve been screwed over and left broken hearted Pushed and shoved because I far ted This world’s insane an I’ll be the first to declare I’m no angel far out I swear I’m back now and my talent remains I’m wild, exciting and always insane I’m tall and good-looking and I taste great And who gives a rat’s bum if I stand you up on a date The word spinner’s back and she’s taking her crown And those who don’t like it can just drown Her red nail polish shines like wet paint Because she’ll always be a sinner, never a saint |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Wow, this is incredible. Just awesome. Excellent job! I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
ow! poor man who tangos with you. lol. Fabulos. -Red If love were a picture that painting would never be finished. |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
i love you jess. this was awesome. and you know what?? you are the best....EVER |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahh I saw Jess back on the front pages and I'm like ohhhh she's back. then... I saw the date  ahh we all miss you Jess.hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it was so raw and full of passion lots of raw potential but i think the rhymns were being forced a little too much |
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