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It's Love... |
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gozaggss Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 33 |
I can’t remember a happier time, I’ve never felt so serene and fine. I can’t believe I have her at last, It just seemed to happen all so fast. She’s the one for me, I know Because around her things just seem to glow I love her, I can’t say it enough What can I say, she’s got the right stuff. She’s got those eyes, so round and full Like heavenly fruit, she’s food for the soul The way she holds my hand; there’s no one here but me But hey, where else would I be? She smiles so brightly whenever I’m around It’s like when I’m here, she never can frown Lovely, lovely, feel-good candy Boy does she make me feel dandy I love her, I can’t say it enough Forever and a day, Baby It’s Fact, she’s the right stuff I guess what I want you to know, Three little words are the best way to show, Despite what I may utter or do, Always know that I.Love.You |
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totyfroty New Member
since 2007-07-06
Posts 6 |
This is so nice and sincere.I love it so much and you know what, lucky her she must be so wonderful and lucky Good luck |
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totyfroty New Member
since 2007-07-06
Posts 6 |
this is so nice and sincere. I love it so much. Lucky her Good luck |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Very nice poem! Lots of emotion! And yes, she must be very lucky!! Keep writing  Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
awe this is sooo sweet I really like how you aren't afraid of admitting it. yes I agree too lucky her hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it seemed to be forced the rhumning i mean i think if you had let it flow more freely it would have been a better poem |
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