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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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0 posted 2007-07-06 02:03 PM



Fairy Tale Envy

And the sense of fairy tales
Make me want a fairy tale too
The love that’s shared
Is the only thing I am jealous of

How I want a prince as kind
To whisper sweet things to me
Someone to hold me day and night
Give me comfort and love

I sing their songs
Thinking maybe that’ll bring me
What I desire most
But of course- only in fairy tales

It warms my heart to hear the songs
But the pangs of envy win
I want what I can’t have
A fairy tale of my own

I wonder why
Can’t I have that love?
The soul of fairy tale romance
The want and need of mine

Maybe I can sit and not think
Of the scenes of beauty
That comes from the inside to the out
But no I can’t let go

So I’ll be miserable
From fairy tale envy

If love were a picture that painting would never be finished.

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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1 posted 2007-07-06 04:15 PM


Ouch. I feel the same way sometimes! I really enjoyed reading this

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-07-09 06:19 PM


ahh yes that fairy tale envy. I think we all have that... great poem.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

sexykitten15
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since 2007-07-22
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3 posted 2007-07-22 04:04 PM


I really enjoyed that...
ya the beginning of mine reminds me of yours..
niec writred I ¢¾ it!!!

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2007-12-16 10:02 AM


Very fairy taleish!
lol

ARCTIC WIND

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