If you're not in it (song)

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Teen Poetry #8

If you're not in it (song)

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-05 05:47 PM

~Well first attempt at a song so tell me what y'all think~
you're arm around my shoulder,
holds me tight when the night gets colder,
and the way you hold my eyes,
it all makes me realize,

Chorus:
I don't want to spend one more night,
without you in my sight,
and I don't want to spend one more minute,
if you're not in it.

As long as we're together,
our love'll be strong as leather,
i'll ride shotgun in your pickup truck,
oh the middles empty just my luck,

Repeat Chorus:

And when we're apart,
i'll still hold you in my heart,
look at me baby,
there's no maybe.

Repeat Chorus:

oh if you're not in it

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Alaina
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since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

1 posted 2007-07-05 08:19 PM

this is great you should try putting music together for it, if you play anything. good work!

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

Jezzika
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since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

2 posted 2007-07-05 10:20 PM

I thought this was awesome!!
I have NO IDEA how to write a song.....lol
I really enjoyed this

One trillion dollars could buy a heart a soul ~ Anti-Flag

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-07-06 12:11 PM

I loved it hunnie!!! It was beautiful

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

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