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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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In Love <3

0 posted 2007-06-30 10:10 PM



Maybe it won’t

I know your words; they are the ones I hear
Nothing as sweet, and never insincere
As I read your letters I wonder what you are saying
Are you trying to get me, what game are we playing

If only you would just say, the way you feel
So I could figure out how to make this real
If it’s not too much to ask of you
Will we make it to the end and through it too?

I don’t really know you that well
Maybe that’s why to confusion I fell
Could we pretend that things will work out for the best?
And put all our feelings on the road for a test

I don’t know if I love you- chances are I don’t
I think it may kill me; but maybe it won’t

If love were a picture that painting would never be finished.

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rhia_5779
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1 posted 2007-07-02 06:16 AM


I don’t know if I love you- chances are I don’t
I think it may kill me; but maybe it won’t

I like this part about not being sure and I can relate to this part if that makes sense. Nice work.

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-07-05 05:29 PM


I think it may kill me; but maybe it won’t

wow what a heavy line for the end I LOVED this so much it was amazing.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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