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Teen Poetry #8

Fight With Me

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2007-06-21 09:26 PM

Relationships are like living things,
They all have their own life spans.
Some will last for eighty years,
Some just a day and a half.

When some relationships come to an end,
The ones that simply don't last,
Two people see the end coming near,
And they just let it come to pass.

But in a select few,
The ones that last for life,
Two people see the end coming,
And one of them stands up to fight.

They fight for the love in their hearts,
And though they may ultimately lose,
That person will know that they went down swinging,
Because it unfortunately takes two.

So if you feel our ground start to shake,
Feel something tearing us apart,
Stand up and fight for us, my love,
Fight for what's in our hearts.

I want you to make me a promise,
Because there's a future out there that I can't see.
Even if it means we're on opposite sides,
Stand up and fight with me.

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

[This message has been edited by WaterFairy103 (06-22-2007 12:03 AM).]

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-06-21 10:53 PM

powerful words. loved it.

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-06-22 06:19 PM

I loved your poem

it seemed very deep. Nice job!!

There is only so much blood i can bleed for you, and continue to live.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-06-26 06:35 PM

loved it
it was sooo powerful and lovely

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