Word don’t cut it so well anymore

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Teen Poetry #8

Word don’t cut it so well anymore

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2007-06-20 06:29 PM

Word don’t cut it so well anymore

Your words that are aimed at me cut so deep
I try to layer myself against these things
But you’ve broken down every defense
I almost laugh at how you got me where you want me
Cornered in angle of your innate imagination

Realizing where I am, I’m slowly breaking free
Understanding- a curse and a blessing to me
Everytime I understand something I gain both friend and enemy
It always bites me in the butt when there is something
Something I don’t understand- they rub it in my face

Well I’m done and I’m leaving you all behind now
No one will toy with me, my will being the one followed
I usually don’t get what I want; in fact it’s annoyingly true
I always get in trouble when I open my mouth
But tonight you’re the one in trouble because I opened my mouth

My words will be the cutting ones this time
Because now, you’re just dirt that I’m stepping in
And my face tonight will be one that you remember forever
The rest of your life you will know who I was
You will weep when you find out who I was and who you lost

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2007-06-20 06:41 PM

Your words that are aimed at me cut so deep
I try to layer myself against these things
But you’ve broken down every defense
I almost laugh at how you got me where you want me
Cornered in angle of your innate imagination

wow...what a way to start a poem. you leave me in awe.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-06-20 07:57 PM

it's nothing compared to the things you write orange. nothing

-Red

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

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