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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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0 posted 2007-06-20 09:10 AM



I’m SO Sorry

I’m so sorry if I hurt you
It wasn’t intended and it hurt
I hated to close my gate to you
I think I’m falling for you and I’m falling far

I’m so scared of this and yet
I keep pushing into it I think I know why
I want someone to love
I want someone to love me too

I’m so sorry if I caused you any pain
My actions were not of my own choice
I would never do something like that
At least not of my own accord

Please say you’ll forgive me
I couldn’t stand for you not to
I’m so sorry it hurt me too
Forgive me please forgive me

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-06-20 11:52 AM


Out of all of your poems...i think this one is my favorite so far Keep them coming.

There is only so much blood i can bleed for you, and continue to live.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
2 posted 2007-06-20 04:03 PM


it was amazing yet again so passionate and begging i loved it
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