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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

0 posted 2007-06-19 02:24 PM

The Flow of Mar

I almost throw up- but keep it all in
I’ve been rereading my poems of a once ago love
And that horrid feeling that makes me cry
Fills my chest and trickles down my spine

It hurts, the pain is too close to physical
And my tear drops land on my finger tips
But I let them stay- they look so pretty there
And there is no one to hold me or say it’s alright

I lived in a lie, and was told it was true
I fell in love with an image, stark and new
I was happy in a false, ugly tone
I was truly there by myself, all alone

Nothing is left of him, but the poems and the memories
And reading the words makes the feelings come back
Strange how it can bring everything back again
The taste of the air and the smell of the trees

My only ties to that horrible time lie dormant
Lurching back to life when they feel like it
And I keep them away though they slink into the dark
And pain is an ebbing thing, flowing continually

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

myheartbleedsrazorblades
Junior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 13
Canada

1 posted 2007-06-19 03:24 PM

This was a good poem just like the rest of yours. I don't usually comment on them but your's always seem to make me think and I actually spend time to see all that you have written. You write very beautifully.

Look on the bright side of life. Dont take it all to seriuosly!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-06-19 03:36 PM

awwwww thanks, it's always nice to know my poetry doesn't go to waste. thanks.

-Red

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

3 posted 2007-06-19 03:45 PM

i just read this. and im gonna say it again...thanks for sharing. this pece was really good. idk how you do it, but you do .

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-06-19 05:59 PM

ahh yes but if nothing else came of the relationship, you still have the poems and memories, Great poem
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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