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Teen Poetry #8

“Sugar Coated”

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
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0 posted 2007-06-19 01:46 PM

“Sugar Coated”

It’s always all sugar coated, for the “protection of the people”
Telling pretty lies and meandering schemes that save the races
For the good, how can bad be good- contradiction pure and clean
But no one cares to do anything, turning to ways of those places

I start to feel sick, emotional, physical, with no relief from pain
It comes from the lies they’ve been feeding me all day
Some too clever and some too weak, to tell between real and fake
They have a way of making everyone look at things the way they say

So clever, sometimes we forget, it’s a juvenile system they play against us
Few of us have seen through hidden disguise in which they so well hide
None of us dare to think or say aloud the things we secretly know are true
Good of people, race’s protection, it is in lies that we comfortably confide

But I’m too tiered to do anything, to busy, all I can do is recognize it
It will go on though, for as long as man rules it is all we will get

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

1 posted 2007-06-19 11:43 PM

it was amazing i kind of thought the last word of the poem should have been know but get also works the rhymning was perfect just amazing

Sad_eyed_girl
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since 2007-06-04

Posts 8

2 posted 2007-06-24 12:15 PM

Great job!!! ur an excellent writer.

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