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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-06-19 01:53 AM


The further apart the fonder the heart,
It seems like you and I don't know where to start,
I've stayed true to you every single day,
we both know you shouldn't but won't you stay?

it'll only hurt worse when you leave,
I'm trying to quit this addiction but it's hard to achieve,
ever since we met i've been addicted to you,
why do I feel it's the worst thing I could do?

your smile, your grin every crease,
with you I always feel in peace,
your twinkling eyes hold me enthralled,
can you feel the yearning my heart called?

when we're together I come to life,
so far I've come when I tried to end my strife,
you saved me when I was down low,
I love you so much I hope you know.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

© Copyright 2007 Krysti - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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1 posted 2007-06-19 01:55 PM


beautiful.

-Red

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
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2 posted 2007-06-19 11:44 PM


lovely and amazing just beautiful good job
Alaina
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3 posted 2007-06-20 12:58 PM


great job i really like this
BrittanyJ
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4 posted 2007-06-20 11:44 AM


Just like the one before It was amazing.

There is only so much blood i can bleed for you, and continue to live.

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