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Will You Judge Too Quickly?
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Will You Judge Too Quickly? |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN 
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i know that im not perfect, i know that i have flaws. but please dont judge too quickly, because im not that bad at all. so what if i like to party, and play guitar till 4 a.m. i may drink untill i puke, but im not ashamed of who i am. i smoke too much and i drink alot. but its my life, not yours. i play guitar and party hard im just letting life run its course. but i wont turn away from you, i will always care. im not going to change my life for you, but you when you need me ill be there. because if you judge too quickly, there are some things you miss. like the fact that im not worthless, and my dreams wont be dismissed. im not saying sorry for who i am am i not good enough for you? because if you think im gonna change my life, i think you have some more thinking to do. so judge me now because of what i do, and forget who i am. im not saying im the best person in life, but im doing all i can. [This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (06-18-2007 09:43 PM).] |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
You are so amazing! I can tell you how much this poem touched me. I love your work. Please keep writing  Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
i know it's never my place, it's never anyone's place to judge but life is on improvement you ALWAYS have a choice you can ALWAYS change for the better, never forget that orange, never forget that -Red Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you. |
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Alaina Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106 |
well i can definitely relate to this poem, you put your thoughts together very nicely |
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WaterFairy103 Member
since 2006-05-31
Posts 196 |
Jeez, you're so good at this. -.- This is one of my favorites, I love the sincerity and truth ringing through the words. Another excellent job. I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
it was an amazing poem isn't that how we all feel that we should not be judged for who we are but that we are understood i loved your poem |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
im not saying sorry for who i am am i not good enough for you? because if you think im gonna change my life, i think you have some more thinking to do.~ Wow that was amazing Orange, I'm glad you are not going to change for anyone. The people who do that make big mistakes. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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