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the concrete rose
Junior Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 33


0 posted 2007-06-13 09:25 PM



This is for the teens or today who demand more voice than what is dished out. Cheers.


The realization is, we need to cease
this motion and be the cure for this disease
that's putting us on Speshul street for being
the slightly under-age rage that
shakes the entirety
of this society and gives the most in
Wall streets entirety
and is stepping up to plate
to be the ones who debate
and equate what becomes the generations
beyond.

The future Vets and doctors
the teachers and the proctors
the rappers and rockers
the shakers and breakers
the ones who can do greater

The Future.

© Copyright 2007 the concrete rose - All Rights Reserved
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
1 posted 2007-06-13 09:38 PM


thank you i shall try to be all you think i can and more. glad that theres one p[erson who doesn't think my generation is a complete waste. i don't really blame them though,- we (as a whoel) aren't turning out so great.

-Reddetta

I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore

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