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Teen Poetry #8

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jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-06-12 02:20 PM

Irritation from this spec of ash
reaching my eye to blind my
failure in a monstrous mask.
Neoprene stretched across my face,
custom fit to leave no hint,
no clue, no speculation
to where the corpse lays
in consternation.
Witnesses laid down
in moist black tar
never to testify or try
to erase the bruises
and stitches surfacing this mask.
Shoveled into furnaces,
the numb limbs fuel
the beast, igniting it's success
to storm idle crooks,
leaking ashes of sagacity
from it's wounds.

-J

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-06-12 08:58 PM

humm, i'm a little confused, but i think i got it. you know it was very interesting. sounds almost like the work of a mofia or somthing like unto it. huummm, i shall have to ponder that . . .

-REDETTA

ps i have no bad to say, i'll save my worst for when you show me something truly horrific, whichi i'm pretty sure will never be the case. lol. good work jj

I stuck my bare hand into your rip cage and fished around until I found your heart ripped it out tore it apart while saying You dont need this anymore

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-12 11:21 PM

wow i'm not to sure what to say these seems very dark and i don't know what to say about it

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