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surf_painter
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0 posted 2007-06-10 11:22 PM


This was inspired by a country song i can't remember the title but it is of a couple the one dies and they meet up later as young children

You see me as I was
I see you as you are now
I stayed the same
You changed
My hapiness envelopes us both
The warmth is soothing
We were friends
But we went our seperate ways
You seem a stranger
I seem an old friend
And we're closer than ever
When you come
I'll be waiting
And then we'll be
As we once were
Forever together

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BrittanyJ
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1 posted 2007-06-11 02:25 PM


I can so relate to that! very nice poem

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

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2 posted 2007-06-14 12:33 PM


Wow I really liked this. So do you listen to country or only happened to hear one song. I think country songs are the best inspiration.
hunnie.

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surf_painter
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3 posted 2007-06-14 07:20 AM


i listen to alot of country songs most of the tmie and yes i find they inspire me to write but when i'm inspired they are not all about the country song itself
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