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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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0 posted 2007-06-06 02:41 PM


If I fell off a cliff it would be into your arms.
If I tried to fly it would be to be with you.

I know you will never cause me harm.
When we are together the truth seems true.

If my tears fall I trust you’ll kiss them dry.  
When I don’t want to get up, you can lift me.

With you I soar, with you I want to fly.
Together I feel there’s still someone to be  

You think about me while I sleep, and I think of you when I am awake
It’s only when I don’t see you in class that I get scared.

Comforted when I can’t go on, it’s because of you my worries go away.
You’re the only one that can make me want to reappear.

I like the feeling of just being able to laugh.
I love that there’s someone to see what beauty is in my smile.

With you there, it’s hard to keep myself sad.
I hope you’re happy because you succeeded, in all your guile.

Best friends once, content to stay,
Instead I fell head over heels, only, for you.


You’re the only one not at all fake.
I am more than happy you like me too.

It’s nice to know that someone sees my dreams.
It’s sweet of you to want me to believe.

I have but one regret because this has to end.
One day our story will run out of  pages.

We see two different people, I the one who pretends.
You the angel who is always brave.

Your eyes don’t see the rebel who wants to be strong.
You can’t see the girl who still has trouble moving on.

You will only know the girl who shows you one side.
When will you know the girl who can't return it if she’s missed?

You think you know the girl to whom you’ll have to say goodbye.
Never will you know this girl, or angel  beyond  our  last  kiss.

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-06-06 03:22 PM


awe I liked this it was really sweet
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
2 posted 2007-06-08 09:56 PM


wow it was such a dream the beginning and then it got sad very good poem i liked it alot
MixedChica
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since 2006-11-10
Posts 34

3 posted 2007-06-10 01:14 AM


I loved this when u sent it to me
Its even more beautiful reading it the second time

WaterFairy103
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since 2006-05-31
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4 posted 2007-06-10 02:08 AM


Wow, this is really great!  My heart cracked a little at the end, good job!

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

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