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BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

0 posted 2007-06-06 10:42 AM

i loved you for making me smile
and staying by my side.
i loved you for making me laugh
how could i've known you lied?

i loved you for giving me life
even though you took it away.
i loved you for holding me close
when i needed you to stay.

i loved you for showing me pain
even though i cried.
i loved you for helping me out
and looking back, i sigh.

i loved you, even though you left;
i hold your memory dear.
i loved you though we're saying good-bye,
but remember, i'll always be here.

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2007-06-06 02:29 PM

A compassionate poem about a subject most people look back on not angerily but upset with the person who lied or faked or which ever the scenario was. A different way of telling something that boys do wayy too often sadly. Too many boys lie or pretend to like a girl and they don't know how many hearts they break.

I haven't seen you much, but nice work. Intriqued to see more. And Welcome to PiP because I think you joined during the time I was away.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-06 03:13 PM

this was the sweetest poem ever. I loved it. hope to read more from you.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

3 posted 2007-06-06 09:23 PM

thanks guys

Life is not a matter of destiny, but a matter of choice.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2007-06-08 09:58 PM

this is an emotional poem and i like how it rhymns and describes so well nice job

Tee
Junior Member

since 2006-12-20

Posts 26
Belgium

5 posted 2007-06-08 10:27 PM

Realy nice poem, did enjoy reading it although I feel sorry for you having to use the past tense. Hope the best for you and may it become present tense again with no ending.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

6 posted 2007-07-12 06:59 PM

the thing i love most about poetry is that you can constantly learn fro it. i love that.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

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