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hate of love
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hate of love |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is 
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I hate that your there when im looking for everything else, That I can’t seem to look away from your annoying self I hate that you’re never aware of your own stupidity That you can’t go one moment without announcing to the city That you are here, and everyone get prepared To be stunned, you make everyone stare. I hate that you’re here and always smiling, That every time I see you you’re happy and laughing I hate that you’re awesome, I just can’t stand it I hate that I make seeing you a habit And that everyone automatically loves you They don’t know who you are, and what you do, I hate everything you’ve done but your my only sun I love that I love you, I hate it too…. -bec <3 |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
can really relate to that one  really loved the lasat two lines amazing.hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
that was amazing the beginning i think was a bit rough but it definitely improved towards the end good job i can't wait to hear more |
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