»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #8
»
Verdict
| Teen Poetry #8 |
|
Verdict |
|
|
buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain 
|
nothing explains this hurt right now no words no tears no way no how its something i have never felt and this pain can not be helped i need to let you go for good without you im nothing, but we know i should i need to let my heart heal and move on from the way i feel through years through time it wont erase but maybe the memory of your face will slowly become a little more vague and maybe the memory of your touch wont be so real and wont mean as much maybe with time my heart will move on and with the seconds your name will be gone i wish for this to last, but as it wont i need you to leave, dont say you wont you and i need a lot of space to forget the way our hearts would race when we looked at eachother and barely smiled right now our love has just been trialed then jury is out and the verdict is in our hearts and love will never win. ~missy My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away.. my love is a waste of time if you never stay [This message has been edited by buttercupbaby (06-04-2007 07:20 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2007 Marisa F - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
very bright and hard to read...but very talenteed writing. i loved the couplets. they just fit together so nicely. good work. |
||
|
buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
thanks :] ha ha, i was trying to do a different color cause i didnt realize how bright green was, but then my internet went down  sorry! lol. thanks for the reply though!~missy |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
