I WIll Put You In Your Place

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Teen Poetry #8

I WIll Put You In Your Place

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-06-03 01:38 AM

running, breathing, crashing, sinking;
the darkness leaves me cold.
im breaking on the concrete feeling,
that i will sink like stone.

and all the while im going down,
a smiles painted on your face.
I guess that im just a no one,
whos not good enough for your grace.

well i'll tell you what, you bitter man
i bet you cant stand as tall as i stand,
when the waves crash down and subdue the tide,
i will still be here ready to fight.

surrounded in you holy light,
can i grace you with my face?
or can you come down here, your holyness...
and let me put you in your place?

WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

1 posted 2007-06-03 02:30 AM

Very good, nice flow. Another brilliant write, if I do say so myself!

I've stopped fighting my inner demons... we're on the same side now.

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-06-07 11:48 PM

that was very powerful thank you for writing it it was very good

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