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0 posted 2007-05-26 01:16 AM


why can't I get you out of my mind,
when we're together I leave my world behind,
I never once thought I could feel like this,
I just figured it'd be another thing i'd miss,

Why do I always think of your smile,
and how I get lost in your eyes every once in awhile,
Lately I have been memorizing your lips,
and how they're always kissing my fingertips,

Why am I stuck in this deep attraction,
I love your simple gestures every little action,
you always make my dark into light,
do you even know I dream of you all night,

So let me tell you how we should be,
baby lets just make it you and me.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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1 posted 2007-05-26 08:16 AM


I REALLY like this. It flowed very nicely. I hope to read more from you soon!!!!!

Pen

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