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0 posted 2007-05-22 05:34 PM


I try to write my heart
But all that comes out when I start
Is nonsense
Perfectly describing everything about me

I didn't ask for this
Understand that now
I don’t know why
And I really don’t care how

I didn't want to love you
But now I guess I'm stuck
Should I tell you?
Or just realize
I'm outta luck?

It's not my fault
At least I hope it ain't
What happened to me?
Life used to be so great...

I didn't want to love you
But now I guess I'm stuck
Should I tell you?
Or just realize
I'm outta luck?

I can't take much more of this
Is love really there?  
Or is it just a myth?

I didn't want to love you
But now I guess i'm stuck
Should I tell you
Or just realize
I'm outta luck?

I didn't want to love you
But now I guess i'm stuck
Should I tell you
Or just realize
I'm outta luck?


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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
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1 posted 2007-05-22 10:26 PM


at times the rhyms seemed forced and others it just seemed to flow nice job though
hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-05-23 04:22 PM


Or just realize
I'm outta luck?~

really liked these lines very good poem.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
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3 posted 2007-05-24 02:17 PM


i  didn't want to love you
But now I guess i'm stuck
Should I tell you
Or just realize
I'm outta luck?
I love that stanza cause I really can relate.. I Don't want to like this person, but I cannot help it. And he isn't helping much because he still dosnt no and keeps flirting with me. AND HES LIKE ONE OF MY BEST FRIENDS TOO!!!!!..Frustrating
but aniway i sooo relate

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