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Teen Poetry #8
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surf_painter
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0 posted 2007-05-19 08:41 PM

There you are behind a tree
I turn
A man is in your place
I remember
Lights off I see you
I look and you are gone
Quick turn, you're here
Long glance a fear
Eyes closed
I remember
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surf_painter
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1 posted 2007-05-19 08:42 PM

i forgot to write that this is not only about people who i have lost but people i no longer see anymore
rhia_5779
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2 posted 2007-05-21 11:38 AM

strong and very powerful
surf_painter
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3 posted 2007-05-22 10:23 PM

thank you very much for your comment
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