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Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2007-05-16 03:18 AM



When the light fades,
The darkness descends.
My thoughts take over,
And "reality" ends.

Time and time again,
My thoughts will run.
Always in vicious cycles,
My submission they have won.

            So I settle down
            With pen and pad.
            To write away,
            All my problems,
            And forget all my pain.
            Just forget it...

I've tried to break free,
Of this never-ending depression.
But it's like a disease,
I'm the center of it's obsession.

This thing buried deep inside,
A secret I've kept locked away.
With every minute and every breathe,
It grows stronger everyday...

           I can't seem to break free...

"The more you suffer, the more it shows you really care.." ~ The Offspring

"Oh every time I close my eyes...I lock it down..oh.." ~ Nelly & Tim Mcg

© Copyright 2007 Staci Weidner - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-05-16 04:06 PM


Wow this is good. I can realte to this so well.. good write hope to read more soon.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

yoshi_gurl
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since 2007-05-18
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Indiana
2 posted 2007-05-18 04:14 PM


I can really relate too

love is so short and forgetting is so long...Xotchil-out

Writers Ghost
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since 2007-05-25
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3 posted 2007-05-27 07:30 PM


I really like this
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