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pencil&paper
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since 2006-09-09
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asleep somewhere in my head

0 posted 2007-05-14 11:54 PM


waiting for somethin' to happen
just watching for somethin' to change
sick of bein' stuck here
just gonna run away

can't wait to get out of this class
away from the deafening clatter
to some place that's better
away from all the strain

thinkin' about escaping
imagining being free
waiting for that damn bell to ring
imagining there's no one but me

bored out of my skull
thinkin' maybe they'll just shut up
tryin' to find some patience
thinkin' maybe I should just give up

but I don't wanna give up
I just wanna get away
to a place where there's no one but me
I just wanna be free


"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2007-05-15 06:29 AM


so true, and amazing. this was awesome. will you do a faveor and jusck out my new onw that doesnt seem to be liked all that much? its called im not you.
surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
2 posted 2007-05-15 07:44 AM


wow how i can relate to this is amazing this is practically all that goes through my head as i wait for the classes to be over good job
hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-05-15 11:47 PM


I love this I know this feeling hehe well I think eveyone does it is school...
hunnie.

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pencil&paper
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since 2006-09-09
Posts 76
asleep somewhere in my head
4 posted 2007-05-26 02:33 AM


thanx for the reviews

ps: i think the smilie looks cool

"Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet

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