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Mr. Omniscient
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0 posted 2007-05-14 09:23 PM


I look at you and what do I see?
Cheeks inflated as if stung by a bumblebee,
You have blissful hands,
Sensitive hands,
Hands that cut through darkness and pull me into the light,
A beautiful girl like you,
You have to be Ms. Right.

Rocks and clusters of metal wrapped around every crack and line can only form a smile ever so divine.
We’re rich girl, we have millions,
With those two flawless sapphires that grow under your eyelids and that treasure chest that contains those thirty-two pearls,
What’s funny is the key to that chest, is merely a simple joke.
Because that simple joke provokes a smile,
And that beautiful smile lifts me up to heaven for a while.

You see,
Beauty doesn’t define you,
You’re not part of beauty’s nature,
You are beauty’s nature, and it is beauty you define.

[This message has been edited by Mr. Omniscient (05-14-2007 10:09 PM).]

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surf_painter
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1 posted 2007-05-15 07:40 AM


that is a beautiful poem it makes anyone feel special the way you describe the person in the poem great job
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2 posted 2007-05-15 01:39 PM


Wow you're back I haven't seen you for so long here... I loved this it was so sweet.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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3 posted 2007-05-17 09:33 PM


Thank you all very much.
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