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Teen Poetry #8

Deafening Eyes

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-05-14 07:11 PM

Burning fuel, keeps flies away,
mixed with perfume, leaves me blind;
can't help but think where her mind reside.
Take another step, can't hear myself
think to let me inside.
But inside its different, inside its magnetic.
The dust cap in her eyes allowing notes
to resonate through hollow cones spinning
out of the black, flimsy diaphragm,
but safe we are;
her blue suspension keeping the beat
all arranged in her basket, letting me know
of a silent pleasure.
Every two step, another ache in my ears;
Jet motors drive this whisper.
She's a million decibels and I,
I am her wooden frame that encloses
this white noise.
My eardrums whistle to
the R&B's of her deafening eyes.

-J

unholyjudgement
Member

since 2007-02-27

Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next

1 posted 2007-05-17 09:04 AM

"The dust cap in her eyes allowing notes
to resonate through hollow cones spinning
out of the black, flimsy diaphragm,
but safe we are"
Very desciptive, imaginative, and real.
Very good write.

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