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Teen Poetry #8

That one first kiss

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2007-05-09 08:15 PM

I'm not sure what to write
My fingers-unsure of what to type
But I guess I'll have to wait
For my inspiration

That young girl,
Whose never been kissed
Who doesn't know what her lips have missed
-Or not missed- according to some
That girl is dancing
To her own drum

She appears so confident
But that's not her
O would it were!
They way she is
But she's just waiting
For that one first kiss

MixedChica
Junior Member

since 2006-11-10

Posts 34

1 posted 2007-05-09 11:11 PM

Wow i've definatly been there, u did a great job describing

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2007-05-11 12:04 PM

wow i know what that feels like which is awsome how you captured that i can't wait for your next poem

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

3 posted 2007-05-11 05:26 PM

im 16 without my first kiss, i know its tough hun..

but one day, one time, it'll be so special, and it might be with the guy you're with forever

I really really loved this.. its my emotions in your words..amazing<3

~missy
My tears of love are a waste of time if I turn away..
my love is a waste of time
if you never stay

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-05-15 11:20 PM

wow I have been there before.. not bad at expressing feelings, I liked this.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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