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Which path?
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Which path? |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Destiny draws the map But where do I turn off? Which is the right path? The roads crisscross into the realms of the insane. I cannot keep the pattern. Constant consistent change. A prayer a day is sent, But I don’t think they find the right mailbox, Or the letter isn’t quite stamped with full dues. One day I will lose all my trains of thought, And once again I won’t know what to do. It is hard to follow the shining light When the room is shadow dark. It is hard to always do whats right When I want to have a heart. It can’t be easy to stick to black and white With no exceptions but be fair. I can’t stay aloof in arguments and fights Because I can't just not care. I am truly lost In the past, in the future And what could have been. Destiny want to give me a hint? which path should I follow? give me a sign for my travels. |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow this was a great impactful poem it just hits you with reality i like it good job |
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stormdancer Junior Member
since 2007-05-10
Posts 31state of confustion |
Excellent. It's nice not to be able to 'guess the next line' in a poem. I like the word choiceage, and the part about the letter and the mailbox. |
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