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Shoe Box |
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MaMii_So_SuDuCtIvE92 New Member
since 2007-02-08
Posts 6Elizabeth, NJ |
Lost in hope, Lost in my mind, these stupid secrets hold me down, Love just is'nt for me and i just relized it!!. My hearts beating fast, bump bump bump it goes in my chest.... I gave something real for something i didn't know, something new, in the end i lost both of you. Feelings of me being strong fill my mind... I put your things and our memories away, you can say i burried them in the past, but really there in a shoe box under my bed. Cause i feel if i burry us away it will take some pain away, so far its working, and im not going to complain. The pain i cant put away in a shoe box and push it under my bed, because these memories and the pain they bring leaves me breathless, and in shakes.. It haunts me everyday, when i was with you it just went away and now your gone these memories are back, these drugs numb the pain, these bottles keep the memories away, but not for long... theses memories i cant hide in a shoe box under my bed like i can do with our memories..... |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this was powerful and how most people feel i haven't gone through an experience where this has happened but i have had one close to it so i applaud you for getting your thoughts on paper good job |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
It hauntingly powerful. I wasn't sure what it was all about but it was still good. |
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