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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I'm sick and tired of this image That America seems to like The tall, tan, blonde, size 0, oversized boobs Every Woman alike WHAT THE HELL?!? is wrong this nation? Why would you mess with God's great creation? You're beautiful the way you are So stop wishing on a stupid star That you'll wake up 20 pounds lighter You're beautiful the way you are And if some stupid guy can't see that He can just go cause you're best friend knows That life isn't isn't about being size 4 It's totally cool being girl next door I'm fine with it So why aren't you Being concerned is okay too But don't over do it You know how I am If anyone can see the real you your best friend can |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
this is such a true poem and i liked its honesty however it was a bit hard to read because the grammar wasn't great there were places where words should have been but weren't or there was places where there were words that should not have been there (ie a double post of the same word)but besides that it was a great write |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow very true and good poem.. how many people need to hear this.. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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