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gozaggss
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since 2006-04-26
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0 posted 2007-05-01 10:16 PM


I’m sitting at the sill,
Looking past the mill.
I see the world as it should be,
Peaceful, beautiful, from sea to sea.
Flocks of birds soaring through the sky,
While little critters scuttle right on by.
Treetops grown into dreadlocks with time
Full of scent; lavender, roses, sagebrush and thyme.
Deserts look uninviting and hostile,
But see the lively mouse; it’s actually quite docile.
But I’m not there.
It truly isn’t fair
Because I’m sitting at the sill
And looking past the mill


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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2007-05-26 08:29 AM


I really liked this. It was so well written and I can relate, if that makes any sense at all.

Pen

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