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surf_painter
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0 posted 2007-04-28 11:01 PM


I'm me as I am
Can you take that
Or is it too much
The answers,
I already know

I may act strange
Or dance around too much
But have you ever thought
Maybe it's to impress
The people I care about

This is the way I am
And will always be
Take it
Or leave it

Cause I ain't changin'
Because it's too fun
So if your not down for hangin'
Just leave me with the weight
Of a thousand ton heart

**I just wrote this up on the spot and thought I would post it and see what you guys thought

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hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-05-02 12:29 PM


Cause I ain't changin'
Because it's too fun
So if your not down for hangin'
Just leave me with the weight
Of a thousand ton heart~

oh I liked this I mean who can't relate... Hope to read more soon.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

surf_painter
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2 posted 2007-05-05 07:14 PM


thank you i actually like that part the best as well and there should be a new one up in the next couple of days
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