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vexx
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0 posted 2007-04-20 11:05 AM


Why i love you?

Once more you ask Why?
Once more filled with fear of loss
Once more confused by feelings that are new
Once more telling me you are weak and i am strong
Have you ever wondered if that was even true

I love your eyes, your smile, your hair
I love your mind, your joy, your fear

My heart will beat
With terrible speed
If you ever walked away


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1 posted 2007-04-20 07:08 PM


Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!!!!



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2 posted 2007-04-22 01:33 PM


Welcome to Passions I really like this, I can relate well to it and, the ending line was like wow I know that feeling exactly. Hope to read more soon…
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