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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-04-16 12:36 PM


you say you wanna kiss me,
outside in the rain,
you say you want me in your arms,
so you can take away my pain,

everytime you say "I love you",
my heart melts even more,
and then I get this feeling,
one I can't ignore,

Now every night I dream,
of your beautiful green eyes,
and I think I figured out this feeling,
it's only butterflies,

So tonight I'll go to sleep,
dreaming only of you,
and the moment I can finally say,
babe I love you too.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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Clockwork_Orange
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1 posted 2007-04-16 05:43 PM


beauty in words♥
Free_Spirit07
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2 posted 2007-04-17 07:22 AM


mmmm lovely!!

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3 posted 2007-04-17 09:24 AM


awwww... this is really great! great flow and rhythm...
hunnie_girl
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4 posted 2007-04-18 12:17 PM


thank you all for you're replies...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

vexx
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5 posted 2007-04-20 10:58 AM


it hold the words i never get said to my love...maybe i can use this as an incourgement...thanks...its beautiful
rhia_5779
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6 posted 2007-04-21 05:18 PM


This was a reallly cute poem.I missed this site, I haven't been on in way too long
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