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lustforgood
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since 2008-01-01
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singapore, singapore

0 posted 2008-01-01 03:22 AM



The day has come, when immaturity fades.
The world is known for the harted, fate
Guilt and hunger will soon wake up the dead
When humans realise it is just too late.
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Modern is great but medieval again awaits
Filth and anger, you choose as faith
When time is there world awaits
Crashing down to you like a billion ton weighs
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Crude or core, experiences needed
One just tested and in the end bleeded
It is not like war that anger feeded
It's the little thing call love that humans really needed.
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Things in life taken granted
Crying over problems not yet decided
Fame and glory is lusted and hunted
World came by and haunt everything till unbonded.
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Creatures of the night haunts one dreams
The love wasn't there as it seems
The word just seems right like fated
Turns out wrong because believing all is fated
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As cruel the world can be
Eyes are set to see
To judge the good and filth
Love concealed.


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1 posted 2008-01-01 11:11 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?.
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xbrokenxlullabyx
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since 2007-12-25
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2 posted 2008-01-01 01:24 PM


this is really strong--great first post, i'm jealous!


This piece is amazing

Susanna V.

lustforgood
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since 2008-01-01
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3 posted 2008-01-01 01:34 PM


thanks guys!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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4 posted 2008-01-01 03:57 PM


wa-oh

-Kate

"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."

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