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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
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Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2007-04-08 03:29 PM


did you get what you wanted?
did it feel good to make me bleed?
was it just not funny enough,
to have me begging on my knees?

was everything that i believed,
a big pre-planned tragidy?
or was it just a coinincidence,
that i was so dicieved?

dont speek to me anymore,
i think ive had enough.
im sorry if im not perfect,
and my soul isnt a dove.

so will you just choke me,
until i turn a cold dead blue;
and all the while keep in mind,
that this is all for you.


I would define, in brief, the poetry of words as the rhythmical creation of Beauty.
-Edgar Allan Poe-


[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (04-09-2007 08:50 PM).]

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1 posted 2007-04-09 10:18 PM


Well I really liked this so clear...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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