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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2007-04-07 01:44 PM



Flick, Flick, Flick
Goes my hair tie
Tick, Tick, Tick
Goes the clock
Still I can’t seem to write a decent song…

I’m sick and tired of this writers block
I’m sick of my frustration
But I can’t find the words
If you’re interrupting my concentration

I know my own sound
But they say is isn’t good enough
You say it isn’t good enough
Why should I care?

I ‘m tired of bein’ told what to do
I’m tired of bein’ told what to say
I ‘m tired of bein’ told how to say what I say
And how to walk my walk
And talk my talk

Can’t you just get outta my face
For like five more minutes?
Can’t you just get outta the room
Until I say it’s okay
For you to walk back through the door
Can’t ya just…Can’t ya just…
Get outta my world?

I don’t need you supervising everything I do!
I don’t need you telling me how to do what I do!
It’s my life…It’s my life…

So cant ya just…..

Get outta my face
For like five more minutes?
Can’t ya just get outta my room
Until I say it’s okay
For you to walk back through my door
Can’t ya just …Can’t ya just…
Get outta my life

I don’t want ya gone
So permanently
But God, you’re getting on my nerves
And I can’t say what I want
For fear of losing your trust
This isn’t about just the adults

Can’t ya just!


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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California
1 posted 2007-04-07 03:54 PM


I LIKE THIS, it was really good. Its witty, and good. This is one of my favorites by you
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